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  1. #1 Homless like the rose 
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    Homeless like the rose…!

    Homeless like the sky

    Without… stars

    Homeless like the road

    Without… cars

    I write the first story of your love

    Homeless like the knight

    Without… horse

    Homeless like the muscle

    Without… force

    I write the wonderful poem of your love

    Homeless like the letter

    Without… mail

    Homeless like the story

    Without… detail

    I write the shortest event of your love

    Homeless like the king

    Without… crown










    Homeless like the people

    Without… town

    I write the sad moment of your love

    Homeless like the moon

    Without… light

    Homeless like the eye

    Without… sight

    I write the unique roman of your love

    Homeless like the sword

    Without… show

    Homeless like the arrow

    Without… bow

    I write the silent breathing of your love

    Homeless like the heart

    Without… palpitation

    Homeless like the party

    Without… invitation

    I write the pure duty of your love










    Homeless like the tree

    Without… roots

    Homeless like the branches

    Without… fruits

    I write the sweet feelings of your love

    Homeless like the morning

    Without… sun

    Homeless like the evening

    Without… run

    I write the best dream of your love

    Homeless like the wish

    Without …beginning

    Homeless like the day

    Without… evening

    I write the biggest guess of your love

    Homeless like the dream

    Without… warm















    Homeless like the path

    Without… form

    I write the dearest flash of your love

    Homeless like the spirit

    Without… shadow

    Homeless like the home

    Without… window

    I write the most romantic escape of your love

    Homeless like the mouth

    Without… kisses

    Homeless like the touch

    Without … lips

    I write the smallest effect of your love

    Homeless like the life

    Without… taste

    Homeless like the bird

    Without… nest

    I write the giant leap of your love












    Homeless like the butterfly

    Without… spring

    Homeless like the moonlight

    Without… ring

    I write the kind smile of your love

    Homeless like the winter

    Without…snow

    Homeless like the forest

    Without… crew

    I write the nearest word to your love

    Homeless like the fire

    Without…wood

    Homeless like the stomach

    Without …food

    Homeless like you, even with streets, with trees, with nothing

    I try to rewrite all the love’s details

    To win your confidence, why not, once more …..

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    very good
    very very good

    sory , I saw that you ought to put this -or like this- sentence in the end

    Homeless like me
    Without you


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    Peace upon you Hitham

    well i wann greet you then congratulate you for this very nice poem
    Really you amazed me ....tyou skillful mastery of languages let obliges me to lift the hat to you ....our dearest poet
    what i read is really wonderful
    but why so desperate because of a woman .....you emptied tour diction for her beatiful eyes

    why homeless .....do women really deserve that huge sacrifice ?
    cheerio
    yours Saliha Naidja
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    Peace upon you Hitham

    well i wann greet you then congratulate you for this very nice poem
    Really you amazed me ....tyou skillful mastery of languages let obliges me to lift the hat to you ....our dearest poet
    what i read is really wonderful
    but why so desperate because of a woman .....you emptied tour diction for her beatiful eyes

    why homeless .....do women really deserve that huge sacrifice ?
    cheerio
    yours Saliha Naidja
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    Hi ! Saliha I hope you have recognized me Iam really pleased to be among you
    thanks
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    I DEDICATE THIS MODEST POEM TO MISS SALIHA NAIDJA AND ALL HER FRIENDS
    CONSTANTINEE
    TELLE QU'UNE VEUVE DELAISSEE
    TELLE QU'UN OISEAU BLESSE
    VIEILLE CONSTANTINE
    BERCEAU DE BENBADIS
    FOYER DES OULAMA JADIS
    MA VIEILLE CONSTANTINE
    NEDJMA DE KATEB YACINE
    O! JE TE PLEURE MA VILLE NATALE
    JE PLEURE TON DESTIN FATAL
    QU'ONT FAIT DE TOI CES ILLETRES?
    CONSTANTINE MA BELLE FLEUR
    DEPOTOIR ?ABATTOIR ? OU CIMETIERE?
    AUSSI GAI
    QU'UN ENFANT
    QUE S'EST-IL PASSE MAINTENANT?
    O! MA CONSTANTINE ! JE TE PLEURE
    JE TE PLEURE DU FOND DU COEUR
    MES SOUVENIR D'ENFANCE ME HANTENT
    DANS TES RUELLES QUI M'ENCHANTENT
    DANS LES BRAS DU RHUMEL
    COMME TU ETAIS SI BELLE
    LE SOLEIL DE TON PRINTEMPS
    ME MANQUE DEPUIS LONGTEMPS
    TU ES SI PALE ET SI TRISTE
    COMME UN CONDAMNE SUR LA LISTE
    7JE TE PLEURE MA CONSTANTINE
    I MISS MY NATIVE TOWN , MY CHILDHOOD FRIENDS MY PRIMARY SCHOOL.............
    I HOPE THAT YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN SALIHA DON'T YOU ?
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    SORRY I HAVE FORGOTTEN THE 'S' OF SOUVENIRS AND THE'E' OF GAIE
    THANKS PLEASE ANSWER
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    Hi Haythem
    Good try dispit the weak forms of it
    keep on trying perhaps one day you `ll be a famous poet
    Best regards from me

    Imad Alyounis
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    woooow
    very good
    when I read it , I was enjoying
    specially this words:

    { Homeless like the sky
    Without… stars
    ,,,
    Homeless like the king
    Without… crown
    ,,,
    Homeless like the moon
    Without… light }

    thanx alot
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    peace on you.......
    homeless ..........what a hard word............
    especially if you are a Palestinian
    "لا تدع أنفك يلامس التراب في غير سجود لله............لا.....تدعه." فطيمة
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    you moved my feels and images
    i hope you will do all your wishes
    ربما عابوا السمو الأدبي بأنه قليل ، ولكن الخير كذلك . وبأنه مخالف ، ولكن الحق كذلك ، وبأنه محير ، ولكن الحسن كذلك، وبأنه كثير التكاليف ، ولكن الحرية كذلك
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