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    1. The stops of the hasbala.taught me
      the game of revenge in silence
      A slap from my bitter tongue
      Will taste you the bitterness
      of my sorrow

      here and there
      Those mute discourses are deceptive
      In the city of daffodills and lilies
      The heart of my wrath quivers
      And wakes up from
      the embezzlement of
      the question and the probability
      Oh
      If you follow that street of skills
      The death is simpler than
      a slow vision
      And if you yield to lowness
      That’s the message of death

      Tush …tush
      You… the world overwhelmed with betrayal
      and hypocrisy
      You… the doubled masterpiece
      You… the fellow of the high citadels
      From a man’s heart
      to a lady
      My mother taught me that woes are destined
      But
      Pound’s poetry taught me
      behind every disaster there’s a woman
      Am I a disaster mum

      You‘re a violet
      a broken mirror
      a wandering boat seeking
      a harbour for rest…My little daughter

      How can I be the source of plague
      as far I’m a woman ; mum
      And behind me there’s a baby of love
      Still sharpens a knife
      A woman tears
      the core of my papers
      and my faith

      A child travels in the narrow pupil
      Of the straw of my closest love
      Tears the fire of my bowels
      that quivers on the name
      of his eternity or extinction
      Hangs the document of my defeat
      on my heart’s inaugurating
      Burns a piece of my cerebellum
      Excessive in amazement

      How come
      And I am a woman
      Destroyed by the highness
      of a shadow … not a woman
      Of a white idea damped with rose
      Chosen for a woman

      Tush …tush
      Your face is no more smiling
      From thinking
      Your neck curved…My little daughter

      Destiny
      That you take refuge to
      a man’s spectrum
      for a woman

      Destiny
      That far glow of a woman
      No shadow
      No ray from a woman

      I smell the odour of eternal death ;mummy
      The female of my destiny
      conquers me on the chest
      of my hatred

      The curve of her eyebrow
      frowns my scared face
      Her perfume’s fragrance
      Her monotonous footsteps on the floor
      Her eyes’ brilliance
      Her dreams
      tear my mistaken age
      that stumbled

      I see her
      A smile wins from nothingness
      Tolls the bell of the end
      And scares my haressed grail

      Now I perceive that
      Love is a fire whose blazing
      is a woman
      Betrayal
      revenge to death
      are notions of a woman
      And the blind hatred is a woman

      Ashes is my heart , mum
      My snow –mum – has become mud
      The song of the spring
      stummered the sonnet
      of funeral and apocalypse

      The stream fell the flower of my age
      I doubt there is a hand that* assassinated the seeds of my happiness
      When my heart blossomed green

      In may or June
      The spring clothed my heart
      Poetry and dancing on nature’s melodies
      My wedding came virgin
      Equals the appointments
      Of my destiny

      Has it come
      I think it so
      A woman comes
      Steals my joy from
      the pocket of my secrets
      Steals my truth’s innocence
      Of my eyesight
      in the room of my tears
      the secret
      She’s a woman
      why do you spell death a lot
      my little daughter
      I miss –mummy –a soil
      to embrace me
      I wish to take refuge of Allah’s shadow
      Eloping From a woman
      I vanish from sun’s rays
      inside my bier
      Escaping from a woman’s shadow
      From the pierceful eyesights
      thrown by a woman
      Death is more simple –mummy –
      Than I feel the defeat of a woman
      That Wilts my rose
      and my reason is a woman

      And me
      Why am I a woman
      who abhors a woman
      Am I not a woman
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    Depleted by the war that we have delivered,
    Tired by the acts that we are crossed,
    we chose to Renounced our weapons and Surrendered,
    to believe.
    Nothing can’t to defend when “the end” is write.

    No
    Let us fly
    As a birds fly
    Let us fly
    to throw in the sky
    we know they are wrong
    Fear that. what can we do.
    I too
    I dream to be a bird
    And to fly too .
    and because you
    its My first flight

    Again thank you
    For this flight.
    and this graet philosophy.
    i feel BAUDLAIRE here.
    Last edited by رزاق الجزائري; 25/06/2008 at 11:43 AM.
    قد تهزم الجيوش لكن لن تهزم الأفكار إذا آن أوانها
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    Quote Originally Posted by رزاق الجزائري View Post
    Depleted by the war that we have delivered,
    Tired by the acts that we are crossed,
    we chose to Renounced our weapons and Surrendered,
    to believe.
    Nothing can’t to defend when “the end” is write.

    No
    Let us fly
    As a birds fly
    Let us fly
    to throw in the sky
    we know they are wrong
    Fear that. what can we do.
    I too
    I dream to be a bird
    And to fly too .
    and because you
    its My first flight

    Again thank you
    For this flight.
    and this graet philosophy.
    i feel BAUDLAIRE here.



    Mr Razzak
    Honestly , i blush of shyness before to reply

    what you you wrote above is full of mistakes ....i wrote them big and i underlinded them
    please spot the mistakes then correct them
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    i am glad teacher.
    i try to correct the mistakes.
    Depleted by the war that we have delivered,
    Tired by the acts that we crossed,
    we chose to Renounce our weapons and Surrender,
    to believe.there is Nothing we can defend when “the end” is written

    and i feel shy here
    .As a birds fly
    as a bird fly or as birds fly. if i want.

    the original poem is in frensh.in the first am a francophone.
    Last edited by رزاق الجزائري; 28/06/2008 at 07:37 PM.
    قد تهزم الجيوش لكن لن تهزم الأفكار إذا آن أوانها
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    The origina poem gift for u.

    Epuisés par la guerre que nous nous sommes livrés,
    Fatigués par les faits que nous avons croisés,
    J'ai choisi de me rendre les armes à la main,
    Y'a plus rien à défendre quand s'inscrit le mot fin
    non
    Laissez-nous voler
    Comme les oiseaux voler
    Laisse nous voler
    Se jeter dans le vent.
    Je sais bien qu'ils se trompent
    Peur qu'en volant
    Mais je voudrais tant
    Aller voguer
    Sur l'océan
    Et puis voler.
    J'ai moi aussi
    Rêvé d'être un oiseau
    Et de voler
    C'est grâce à vous
    Mon premier vol
    Encore merci
    Pour cet envol.

    You have all my respect
    welcome
    Last edited by رزاق الجزائري; 28/06/2008 at 07:42 PM.
    قد تهزم الجيوش لكن لن تهزم الأفكار إذا آن أوانها
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    Quote Originally Posted by رزاق الجزائري View Post
    The origina poem gift for u.

    Epuisés par la guerre que nous nous sommes livrés,
    Fatigués par les faits que nous avons croisés,
    J'ai choisi de me rendre les armes à la main,
    Y'a plus rien à défendre quand s'inscrit le mot fin
    non
    Laissez-nous voler
    Comme les oiseaux voler
    Laisse nous voler
    Se jeter dans le vent.
    Je sais bien qu'ils se trompent
    Peur qu'en volant
    Mais je voudrais tant
    Aller voguer
    Sur l'océan
    Et puis voler.
    J'ai moi aussi
    Rêvé d'être un oiseau
    Et de voler
    C'est grâce à vous
    Mon premier vol
    Encore merci
    Pour cet envol.

    You have all my respect
    welcome



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    I WONDER IF I CAN WRITE IN FRENCH IN THIS SPACE WOULD YOU PLEASE HELP ME? THAK YOU
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