Homless like the rose

[هيثم سعد زيان]

Homeless like the rose…!

Homeless like the sky

Without… stars

Homeless like the road

Without… cars

I write the first story of your love

Homeless like the knight

Without… horse

Homeless like the muscle

Without… force

I write the wonderful poem of your love

Homeless like the letter

Without… mail

Homeless like the story

Without… detail

I write the shortest event of your love

Homeless like the king

Without… crown










Homeless like the people

Without… town

I write the sad moment of your love

Homeless like the moon

Without… light

Homeless like the eye

Without… sight

I write the unique roman of your love

Homeless like the sword

Without… show

Homeless like the arrow

Without… bow

I write the silent breathing of your love

Homeless like the heart

Without… palpitation

Homeless like the party

Without… invitation

I write the pure duty of your love










Homeless like the tree

Without… roots

Homeless like the branches

Without… fruits

I write the sweet feelings of your love

Homeless like the morning

Without… sun

Homeless like the evening

Without… run

I write the best dream of your love

Homeless like the wish

Without …beginning

Homeless like the day

Without… evening

I write the biggest guess of your love

Homeless like the dream

Without… warm















Homeless like the path

Without… form

I write the dearest flash of your love

Homeless like the spirit

Without… shadow

Homeless like the home

Without… window

I write the most romantic escape of your love

Homeless like the mouth

Without… kisses

Homeless like the touch

Without … lips

I write the smallest effect of your love

Homeless like the life

Without… taste

Homeless like the bird

Without… nest

I write the giant leap of your love












Homeless like the butterfly

Without… spring

Homeless like the moonlight

Without… ring

I write the kind smile of your love

Homeless like the winter

Without…snow

Homeless like the forest

Without… crew

I write the nearest word to your love

Homeless like the fire

Without…wood

Homeless like the stomach

Without …food

Homeless like you, even with streets, with trees, with nothing

I try to rewrite all the love’s details

To win your confidence, why not, once more …..

[كريم محسن]

رد: Homless like the rose

very good
very very good

sory , I saw that you ought to put this -or like this- sentence in the end

Homeless like me
Without you

[صليحة نعيجة]

رد: Homless like the rose

Peace upon you Hitham

well i wann greet you then congratulate you for this very nice poem
Really you amazed me ....tyou skillful mastery of languages let obliges me to lift the hat to you ....our dearest poet
what i read is really wonderful
but why so desperate because of a woman .....you emptied tour diction for her beatiful eyes

why homeless .....do women really deserve that huge sacrifice ?
cheerio
yours Saliha Naidja

[صليحة نعيجة]

رد: Homless like the rose

Peace upon you Hitham

well i wann greet you then congratulate you for this very nice poem
Really you amazed me ....tyou skillful mastery of languages let obliges me to lift the hat to you ....our dearest poet
what i read is really wonderful
but why so desperate because of a woman .....you emptied tour diction for her beatiful eyes

why homeless .....do women really deserve that huge sacrifice ?
cheerio
yours Saliha Naidja

[الواحة]

رد: Homless like the rose

Hi ! Saliha I hope you have recognized me Iam really pleased to be among you
thanks

[الواحة]

رد: Homeless like the rose

I DEDICATE THIS MODEST POEM TO MISS SALIHA NAIDJA AND ALL HER FRIENDS
CONSTANTINEE
TELLE QU'UNE VEUVE DELAISSEE
TELLE QU'UN OISEAU BLESSE
VIEILLE CONSTANTINE
BERCEAU DE BENBADIS
FOYER DES OULAMA JADIS
MA VIEILLE CONSTANTINE
NEDJMA DE KATEB YACINE
O! JE TE PLEURE MA VILLE NATALE
JE PLEURE TON DESTIN FATAL
QU'ONT FAIT DE TOI CES ILLETRES?
CONSTANTINE MA BELLE FLEUR
DEPOTOIR ?ABATTOIR ? OU CIMETIERE?
AUSSI GAIQU'UN ENFANT
QUE S'EST-IL PASSE MAINTENANT?
O! MA CONSTANTINE ! JE TE PLEURE
JE TE PLEURE DU FOND DU COEUR
MES SOUVENIR D'ENFANCE ME HANTENT
DANS TES RUELLES QUI M'ENCHANTENT
DANS LES BRAS DU RHUMEL
COMME TU ETAIS SI BELLE
LE SOLEIL DE TON PRINTEMPS
ME MANQUE DEPUIS LONGTEMPS
TU ES SI PALE ET SI TRISTE
COMME UN CONDAMNE SUR LA LISTE
7JE TE PLEURE MA CONSTANTINE
I MISS MY NATIVE TOWN , MY CHILDHOOD FRIENDS MY PRIMARY SCHOOL.............
I HOPE THAT YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN SALIHA DON'T YOU ?

[الواحة]

رد: Homless like the rose

SORRY I HAVE FORGOTTEN THE 'S' OF SOUVENIRS AND THE'E' OF GAIE
THANKS PLEASE ANSWER

[عماد اليونس]

رد: Homless like the rose

Hi Haythem
Good try dispit the weak forms of it
keep on trying perhaps one day you `ll be a famous poet
Best regards from me

Imad Alyounis

[مشاعـر]

رد: Homless like the rose

woooow
very good
when I read it , I was enjoying
specially this words:

{ Homeless like the sky
Without… stars
,,,
Homeless like the king
Without… crown
,,,
Homeless like the moon
Without… light }

thanx alot

[فطيمة عزوني]

peace on you.......
homeless ..........what a hard word............
especially if you are a Palestinian

[عبد الله نفاخ]

you moved my feels and images
i hope you will do all your wishes